"This invite has a great deal of writable space, which is part of the reason I chose to sample it. Unfortunately, to me in person, the white space in the middle it just too big. It really makes the texture of the paper come through and I don't think that it is quite so complimentary with the striped boarder. If I were to order this, I'd try to get a darker yellow color, this yellow is so bright it doesn't stand out from the white background enough. I'd also go with a larger font so that less of the white background is visible. For reference, the other designs I am considering are Turning Triangles, and Bold Geometry."